Sunday, 27 December 2015

Chapter 2

Chapter 2
Two months before….
A Dawn of Promise
By Lisa Rhimes
The morning sun cadenced through the pale semen curtains, disturbing unperturbed sleepy eyelids. The warm bed swallowed the petite girl, drowning her in the warmth of her Egyptian cotton sheets. The feelings of sheer comfort overwhelmed her senses, assisting her in her fight to stay in bed for just a little longer. Her reluctance to get out of bed and get ready for a tiring day at university was an everyday battle. Her mum’s constant nagging started a ritual uproar, forcing her to eventually give up, to open her eyes and embrace the new day. A day filled with hope and happiness. A day filled with promise.
Some 140 000 000 kilometers away lay a lifeless body, with eyes that refuses to close. The setting sun glistens in the distance yet she does not wish to follow the rays of light with her eyes. An innocent eighteen year old girl drowning in a pool of her own blood. The discomfort of having her leg blown off magnifies the intensity of the pain that pulses through her every vein. She set off for university in the morning with the hope of staying alive for yet another day so that she could go back to her university to seek more knowledge again tomorrow. The state of the war that cursed the people of her country made it almost impossible to continue with normal daily routines yet she resisted living in constant fear.  She had a right to education and she would not let the war take away yet another one of her rights. Her reluctance to stay cooped up in her home had got her shot. Her necessary denial of the fear that has become a part of them all had resulted in her gasping for one last breath, a last chance to live. She wishes to ignore the pain and to run as fast as she can to her mother. She wants to embrace her one more time. Being the sole living member of a family of five her mother would now lose any hope she had left. This eighteen year old girl had left home promising her mother that she would stay safe. Eventually after hours of not returning her mother would realize that she had broken the promise. She had gained more knowledge but she had lost the battle to stay alive. With the sound of the screams of other hurt victims, she gives up; she closes her eyes with prayer resounding on her lips.
The war may someday end; hope, happiness and promise may begin again but what about that mother? That mother who had her whole family wiped out by weapons of war in a matter of weeks. Can the light of peace ever overcome the darkness she faces because of the war? What about the hopelessness that will fill her tears? After the war will she ever have her hope restored? Or will she too be destroyed before the war ends?
Vision Magazine

The lecture hall filled up as promptly as the lecture had begun. We were expected to pre-read the rather tear-jerking short story which featured in Vision Magazine and was written by a world renowned journalist who drew inspiration from the ongoing war in the Middle East. Even though it was a narrative piece, it used hardcore facts as its starting point.                                                                                                                                             The slender, cheeky-looking lecturer stared at the crowd with preying eyes that were visible through her square-framed Vogue glasses. She pointed a lean finger towards me. “You,” she said. I flinched, my insides were screaming. The thought of being asked a question in front of people I barely knew scared me. The thought of being asked a question and not knowing the answer petrified me even more. The question was asked in a stern and steady voice, “What do you think it means that journalists play the watchdog role?” I hesitated and eventually opened my mouth to squeak out the words, “Journalists watch over their society and the world. They act as the eyes and ears of people within their society and report what they see to them. They watch public figures and expose truths.” She gave somewhat of an arrogant smirk. “The truth is of utmost importance. Hence as journalists it’s important that you get your facts straight.”                         “But what happens when there are two different sides to a story. Which side do you consider to be the truth?” a deep voiced boy stood up and enquired.                                 “It is your duty as a journalist to report both sides and give both parties an equal hearing.” She pranced forward yelling the word, “Objectivity.” “Journalists should always remain objective. Never ever get personally involved in your story.”                                       That’s easy, I thought. You are reporting about people who make no sort of difference in your life in any way so there’s no need to get so involved in your story that feelings begin to cloud your judgments. Miss Meany advanced forward carefully studying the eager faces of a few of the hundred plus students that made up her class.  “The news currently reveals the shocking truth of the war that is occurring in the Middle East. The video clips of the dead bodies that appear on the daily news makes hearts melt and souls ache. It gains our attention and makes us stop what we doing and listen and these television features makes us feel sympathy or rather empathize with these victims of war,” she stated. “How do magazines sells stories on war or on countries in a state of unrest?” The question albeit a rhetorical one had got everyone in her lecture hall thinking. Sensationalism,” she screeched.  “Sensationalism is used in most magazines and online sites today. It is a way of presenting facts and events by using shocking words to grab people’s attention and get them interested to read the article further. Sensationalism is also a technique of representing truths and facts in a way that makes them seem more shocking than they really are. Although we try to break free from this technique, sensationalism sells and it is trending.”                                                                                                                                The next hour of the lecture passed by with more facts and journalistic jargon and I must have drifted into daydream land as I could not even remember the way in which the lecture had ended. All I knew was my first assignment awaited me and I was keen on setting the bar high. The creative writing task to kick start our journalistic portfolio did not have to relate to current events, but it had to use facts as a starting point.  The lecturer wanted a short story for a magazine, a sensationalized story just like the one written by Lisa Rhimes. One that would sell copies. I decided the quality of work I submitted for journalism class would be my best work ever. I was set to draw inspiration for my story from rather unlikely sources but I was yet to see that inspiration would draw me and that my story would be written by me from the story of another. 

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